Saturday Story: Her Homey Cafe (For FTP & Writing Prompt)
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Karen loved her café. Her grandma had made it so comfy, it felt like a warm old kitchen. Her modern mom wanted to change this place into a fancy restaurant where people can buy expensive small dishes. She fought hard to keep it as her grandma had left it.
“You see how empty this place looks like,” she used to say, “What people want to eat in a place without a single Tablecloth”. Karen thought that the marble pattern looked better than any tablecloths. And it was not always empty, the regular always came back with smile on their face.
Total: 100 words for Tablecloth (100)
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This is also my first story (in ages) for Creative Writing Prompt at Creative Writing Ink. (See the image above)
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I like this. I can see the place. Interesting that she feels closer to the grandma than the mum.
It feesl more like the beginning of a story than a story though.
Thank you 🙂
I am closer to my mom but i often see people who are closer to their grandma and I think that’s also a cool thing.
I know…I was going to write something else but the words limit stopped me 😦
Empty is certainly a sign that something’s wrong. I always liked the old time atmosphere better, too.
Not quite empty 😉 Her mother thinks it’s empty but she thinks it’s not, there are always the regulars.
That’s a good point. POV make all the difference.
Love the feelings here! Great flash, Nov. xxx
Thank you Red 🙂