3 Hot Flashes – What Should Martha Do?

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Here’s the second Hot Flash, the word is Trace:

Reality or Imagination

Martha needed to be sure that John is still her good son. The list on that awful book might only be his idea of a thriller book. She had to trace all the victim’s name, whether all of them are real or just figments of her son’s imagination.

Total: 48 words

Next Word is Trace, you can read my flash on page 3

17 thoughts on “3 Hot Flashes – What Should Martha Do?

        1. oh no…I meant on the email, I gave you the link for dec 9 but I published on 8 ๐Ÿ™‚

          The url for the pages is changed because wordpress has the feature to make pages in one post

    1. That’s the message I want to deliver, how Martha couldn’t sleep well after finding the book…I am glad you got it ๐Ÿ™‚

      I have fixed the problem…I put the wrong link there. Thank you for letting me know the link didn’t work.

      Does that mean I can link it to your The Serialists? but it’s just a flash not a short

  1. Oooohhh!! Looks like her son is really creepy…. ๐Ÿ˜‰

    But…. D’ohhh!! I can’t read page 2 either… I get a “404 Error – Not found” page instead. I think your link is broken. ๐Ÿ˜ฆ

    1. Actually, without the link, you can still see page 2, the original link from WP is under the like button, but it was very small, like this>> Pages: 1 2 3.
      So small and people often didn’t notice so I put the link again on the post. I have fixed the problem and hope you can read it now, Miyuki ๐Ÿ™‚

      Well, she found a horrible diary…but I bet every mother will doubt it first but still has nightmare about it.

      1. That is a horrible thing for Martha to discover!!… I feel so bad for her to know that the son she loves is a monster. I know that she will be in misery until she can decide what to do. I think the next short story will be very interesting indeed, Novia! ๐Ÿ˜‰

        Brrrr!!! The creepy things your lil’ mind thinks up!! ๐Ÿ˜‰

        1. Thank you Miyuki ๐Ÿ™‚
          Maybe one day I can turn this into a real long novella ๐Ÿ˜‰

          ๐Ÿ˜€ I don’t know why it’s easier to come up with creepy stories than romance, probably the effect of watching too much horror and thriller since I was a kid ๐Ÿ˜‰

  2. Creepy, creepy. May I correct something? Sweet is sweat in flash one and pigment should be figment in flash two. Please tell me if I shouldn’t say anything anymore and I will shut up. ๐Ÿ™‚

    1. oh thank you for seeing those mistakes…I guess that’s why writers need editors, I didn’t spot those mistakes at all!

      will fix it once I get home from work ๐Ÿ™‚

  3. How gruesomely wicked Miss. Novia
    you have a wonderful talent for these
    FTP’s my wondrously fine friend ๐Ÿ™‚ ๐Ÿ™‚

    Andro xxx

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