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3 Hot Flashes – What Should Martha Do?

On my previous Flash, I left Martha feeling shocked because she had just found out that her son, John, was a serial killer. Please read Little Black Book first.

I promised Red, I am going to continue the story…and here they are wrapped in 3 hot flashes. I put them all in three different pages

Hot Flashes are extra words for Flash in The Pan hosted by Red @ Mommy’s Money Matter. Hot Flashes only allow us to write 50 words or less. for me, it’s really tough!

Here’s the first Hot Flash, the word is DANCE:

Disturbed Memory 

Martha is teaching little John how to dance. She feels so happy even though John keeps stepping on her feet. Martha sees John dancing with a beautiful girl but then it changes into John dancing on so many dead bodies.

She woke up with sweat all over her body.

Total: 49 words

Next Word is Trace, you can read my flash on page 2

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I actively maintained 2 blogs. My personal blog is about things that I love: Turtles, Books, Movies, Music, Larc en Ciel, Muse, Cillian Murphy, The Mighty Boosh and many more. I also help my 3 super cute turtles, Kroten, Papoe and Kurome, to maintain their own blog: http://kamekroten.wordpress.com

17 comments on “3 Hot Flashes – What Should Martha Do?

  1. Red
    December 9, 2012

    Very cool! (Change your links for page two and three. You changed the date.) ❤ xxx

    • Novroz
      December 9, 2012

      Thank you, Red 🙂

      Yeah, I changed it from 9 to 8. Sorry to cause you extra work.

      • Red
        December 9, 2012

        No, did you change it here on your pages? I could only read them because I knew what the links were.

        • Novroz
          December 9, 2012

          oh no…I meant on the email, I gave you the link for dec 9 but I published on 8 🙂

          The url for the pages is changed because wordpress has the feature to make pages in one post

  2. aliceaudrey
    December 10, 2012

    I can see why a diary like that would cause nightmares.

    Hey, when I click on page 2 I get a 404 – Not Found Error message.

    BTW, this counts as a serial now, even without page 2.

    • Novroz
      December 10, 2012

      That’s the message I want to deliver, how Martha couldn’t sleep well after finding the book…I am glad you got it 🙂

      I have fixed the problem…I put the wrong link there. Thank you for letting me know the link didn’t work.

      Does that mean I can link it to your The Serialists? but it’s just a flash not a short

  3. Nekoneko
    December 10, 2012

    Oooohhh!! Looks like her son is really creepy…. 😉

    But…. D’ohhh!! I can’t read page 2 either… I get a “404 Error – Not found” page instead. I think your link is broken. 😦

    • Novroz
      December 10, 2012

      Actually, without the link, you can still see page 2, the original link from WP is under the like button, but it was very small, like this>> Pages: 1 2 3.
      So small and people often didn’t notice so I put the link again on the post. I have fixed the problem and hope you can read it now, Miyuki 🙂

      Well, she found a horrible diary…but I bet every mother will doubt it first but still has nightmare about it.

      • Nekoneko
        December 13, 2012

        That is a horrible thing for Martha to discover!!… I feel so bad for her to know that the son she loves is a monster. I know that she will be in misery until she can decide what to do. I think the next short story will be very interesting indeed, Novia! 😉

        Brrrr!!! The creepy things your lil’ mind thinks up!! 😉

        • Novroz
          December 13, 2012

          Thank you Miyuki 🙂
          Maybe one day I can turn this into a real long novella 😉

          😀 I don’t know why it’s easier to come up with creepy stories than romance, probably the effect of watching too much horror and thriller since I was a kid 😉

  4. Caroline
    December 11, 2012

    Creepy, creepy. May I correct something? Sweet is sweat in flash one and pigment should be figment in flash two. Please tell me if I shouldn’t say anything anymore and I will shut up. 🙂

    • Novroz
      December 11, 2012

      oh thank you for seeing those mistakes…I guess that’s why writers need editors, I didn’t spot those mistakes at all!

      will fix it once I get home from work 🙂

  5. Androgoth
    December 13, 2012

    How gruesomely wicked Miss. Novia
    you have a wonderful talent for these
    FTP’s my wondrously fine friend 🙂 🙂

    Andro xxx

    • Novroz
      December 13, 2012

      Thank you Andro 🙂
      Although…being gruesome is more your specialist than mine 😉

  6. Let's CUT the Crap!
    December 20, 2012

    Slick! I like how you your flashes carry a continuous thread with Martha as your main character.

    • Novroz
      December 20, 2012

      Thank you Tess 🙂
      I am trying to give a conclusion to what happened after Martha found out the truth about her son

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